Improve the following sentences using proper parallel constructions. You can either rewrite the entire sentence or revise only the part that needs correction. Write your answers in your notebook.
1. Wilson felt that he had made an excellent deal and that he bought a masterpiece.
2. This is a product which is handy and it does a lot of things.
3. They were walking, yet seemingly they were not moved.
4. Since it was easy to use and it was cheap, it sold very well.
5. The dog was barking, and we ran.
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Explanation:
Wilson felt that he had made an excellent deal and that he had bought a masterpiece.
This is a handy product that performs multiple functions.
They were walking, yet seemingly they were motionless.
Since it was easy to use and inexpensive, it sold very well.
The dog was barking, and we were running.